Commit 5018dc163eaf620159efec3f49b4bf2b2e286656
tweak some verbiage in the intro and title
Paul Frazee committed on 3/20/2016, 9:51:28 PMParent: c0c9508d732a53b79ef287fd75268ac0d50dda3a
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| tmpl/docs/basics/install-the-database.html.js | changed |
| tmpl/docs/basics/publish-a-message.html.js | changed |
| tmpl/docs/basics/read-your-log.md | changed |
| tmpl/head.part.js | changed |
| tmpl/index.html.js | changed |
| tmpl/docs/basics/install-the-database.html.js | ||
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| @@ -23,17 +23,17 @@ | ||
| 23 | 23 | </blockquote> |
| 24 | 24 | <h2>Next:</h2> |
| 25 | 25 | <div class="choice-widget"> |
| 26 | 26 | <a href="/apps/index.html"> |
| 27 | - <h2>Choose an application</h2> | |
| 27 | + <h2>Applications</h2> | |
| 28 | 28 | <p> |
| 29 | - Find a UI for Scuttlebot with the existing applications. | |
| 29 | + Choose a UI for Scuttlebot. | |
| 30 | 30 | </p> |
| 31 | 31 | </a> |
| 32 | - <a href="/docs/basics/open-a-client.html"> | |
| 33 | - <h2>Continue this guide</h2> | |
| 32 | + <a href="/docs/basics/publish-a-message.html"> | |
| 33 | + <h2>Read more</h2> | |
| 34 | 34 | <p> |
| 35 | - Learn how to build your own applications. | |
| 35 | + Learn about the API. | |
| 36 | 36 | </p> |
| 37 | 37 | </a> |
| 38 | 38 | </div> |
| 39 | 39 | ` |
| tmpl/docs/basics/publish-a-message.html.js | ||
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| @@ -9,9 +9,8 @@ | ||
| 9 | 9 | content: ` |
| 10 | 10 | <h2>Publish a message</h2> |
| 11 | 11 | <p> |
| 12 | 12 | Every user has an append-only log of JSON messages, called their feed. |
| 13 | - Let's start your feed by telling the world, hello! | |
| 14 | 13 | </p> |
| 15 | 14 | <p> |
| 16 | 15 | Use this command to publish your first message: |
| 17 | 16 | </p> |
| tmpl/docs/basics/read-your-log.md | ||
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| @@ -1,7 +1,6 @@ | ||
| 1 | 1 | ## Read your log |
| 2 | 2 | |
| 3 | -Let's read back your log. | |
| 4 | 3 | Use this command to get your ID: |
| 5 | 4 | |
| 6 | 5 | ```bash |
| 7 | 6 | sbot whoami |
| tmpl/head.part.js | ||
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| @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ | ||
| 2 | 2 | opts = opts || {} |
| 3 | 3 | if (opts.title) |
| 4 | 4 | opts.title += ' - Scuttlebot' |
| 5 | 5 | else |
| 6 | - opts.title = 'Scuttlebot p2p database' | |
| 6 | + opts.title = 'Scuttlebot peer-to-peer log store' | |
| 7 | 7 | |
| 8 | 8 | return `<head> |
| 9 | 9 | <title>${opts.title}</title> |
| 10 | 10 | <link rel="icon" href="/img/icon.png"> |
| tmpl/index.html.js | ||
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| @@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ | ||
| 8 | 8 | path: '/docs/basics/install-the-database.html', |
| 9 | 9 | hero: ` |
| 10 | 10 | <div class="hero big"> |
| 11 | 11 | <img src="/img/hermies-256.png"> |
| 12 | - <h1>Scuttlebot<br><small>a social p2p database<br>for people tired of cloud software</small></h1> | |
| 12 | + <h1>Scuttlebot<br><small>a peer-to-peer messenger<br>for people tired of cloud software</small></h1> | |
| 13 | 13 | <p> |
| 14 | 14 | <a class="cta" href="javascript:alert('TODO: This will popup to a youtube video demoing sbot install and usage, and then patchwork')">▶ See it in action</a> |
| 15 | 15 | <a class="cta dark" href="/docs/basics/install-the-database.html"><small>⬇</small> Download now</a> |
| 16 | 16 | </p> |
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