Commit c3f76b78edb16ae2398039b19f040df909dd2a13
Merge pull request #8 from dangerousbeans/master
front page copy changesJoran Kikke authored on 5/20/2017, 10:33:28 PM
GitHub committed on 5/20/2017, 10:33:28 PM
Parent: 847c9f905f68514078714c6042b94acd2abecac0
Parent: 3dedf91059efa9734964b7928b3fc7ed78522894
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| 22 | 22 … | .col-sm-7.col-sm-offset-5.text-box-red.text-right | |
| 23 | 23 … | %br | |
| 24 | 24 … | %br | |
| 25 | 25 … | %h1.text-uppercase | |
| 26 | - Project Entropy is a floating experiment powered by the Ethereum | ||
| 27 | - blockchain. | ||
| 26 … | + Project Entropy is a floating experiment powered by Ethereum | ||
| 28 | 27 … | ||
| 29 | 28 … | .row | |
| 30 | 29 … | .col-sm-7.col-sm-offset-5.text-box-red.text-right | |
| 31 | 30 … | %p.lead | |
| 32 | - We're launching a community steered fleet of sailing | ||
| 33 | - hackspaces, starting with a crowd-owned boat that sails around the world | ||
| 34 | - %p.lead | ||
| 35 | - anyone can be part of our global community, as a citizen, volunteer crew or skipper | ||
| 36 | - with your own boat | ||
| 31 … | + We're launching a community steered fleet of sailing hackspaces, starting with a crowd-owned boat that sails around the world | ||
| 37 | 32 … | ||
| 38 | 33 … | ||
| 39 | 34 … | ||
| 40 | 35 … | ||
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| 43 | 38 … | .row | |
| 44 | 39 … | .col-sm-7.text-box-lightblue.text-left | |
| 45 | 40 … | %br | |
| 46 | 41 … | %br | |
| 47 | - %h1.text-uppercase with a global community | ||
| 42 … | + %h1.text-uppercase global community | ||
| 48 | 43 … | ||
| 49 | 44 … | ||
| 50 | 45 … | .row | |
| 51 | 46 … | .col-sm-7.text-box-lightblue.text-left | |
| 52 | 47 … | %p.lead | |
| 53 | - As a citizen of Entropy, you can be part of | ||
| 54 | - the community that suggests and | ||
| 55 | - votes on everything the fleet is aiming for - destinations, ideas and projects | ||
| 48 … | + All entropy contributors are citizens of a experimental micronation without centralised government. | ||
| 49 … | + Citizens can suggest new aims and destinations for the project. | ||
| 50 … | + Everyone has the option toand vote on everything the fleet is aiming for - destinations sailed towards, ideas built and projects helped | ||
| 56 | 51 … | ||
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| 58 | 53 … | = link_to 'JOIN US', page_path('community'), class:'btn btn-primary btn-lg btn-block ghost-button-lightblue' | |
| 59 | 54 … | ||
| 60 | 55 … | ||
| 61 | - -# .banner-left.col-lg-7.text-box-white | ||
| 62 | - -# .row | ||
| 63 | - -# .col-lg-8.col-lg-offset-3.text-right | ||
| 64 | - -# %p.lead.right-space | ||
| 65 | - -# Entropy is the worlds first DAO controlled | ||
| 66 | - -# %br | ||
| 67 | - -# fleet of sailing hackspaces. | ||
| 68 | - -# | ||
| 69 | - | ||
| 70 | - | ||
| 71 | 56 … | .header.secondary.beta.scrollme | |
| 72 | 57 … | .container | |
| 73 | 58 … | .row | |
| 74 | 59 … | ||
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| 80 | 65 … | ||
| 81 | 66 … | .row | |
| 82 | 67 … | .col-sm-7.col-sm-offset-5.text-right.text-box-lightblue | |
| 83 | 68 … | %p.lead | |
| 84 | - We are all about being creative | ||
| 85 | - %br - manually & digitally. | ||
| 69 … | + Entropy is about being creative, manually and digitally, prototyping and bringing cool projects to life. | ||
| 70 … | + | ||
| 86 | 71 … | %p.lead | |
| 87 | - We want to share this and set aside room and time to develop cool projects, push blockchain, ethereum and p2p ideas | ||
| 88 | - %p.lead | ||
| 89 | - all open source of course! | ||
| 72 … | + The fleet carries a hackspace, free to be used to learn, build prototypes and repair or create useful things for other groups to use | ||
| 73 … | + anything from p2p protocols to solarpunk water recyclers | ||
| 90 | 74 … | ||
| 91 | 75 … | .col-sm-7.col-sm-offset-5.text-right.no-padding.animateme.scrollme{"data-from" => "0.75", "data-opacity" => "0", "data-to" => "0", "data-translatex" => "400", "data-when" => "enter", :style => "opacity: 0.77; transform: translate3d(91px, 0px, 0px) rotateX(0deg) rotateY(0deg) rotateZ(0deg) scale3d(1, 1, 1);"} | |
| 92 | 76 … | = link_to 'projects', page_path('projects'), class:'btn btn-primary btn-lg btn-block ghost-button-lightblue' | |
| 93 | 77 … | ||
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| 97 | 81 … | .col-sm-8.text-left.text-box-red | |
| 98 | 82 … | %br | |
| 99 | 83 … | %br | |
| 100 | 84 … | %h1.text-uppercase | |
| 101 | - you decide where we go | ||
| 85 … | + you decide where Entropy goes | ||
| 102 | 86 … | ||
| 103 | 87 … | .row | |
| 104 | 88 … | .col-sm-8.text-box-red.text-left | |
| 105 | 89 … | %p.lead | |
| 106 | 90 … | We want to tell the story of the boat without a captain. | |
| 107 | 91 … | ||
| 108 | - | ||
| 109 | - | ||
| 110 | 92 … | %p.lead | |
| 111 | 93 … | Entropy is growing into a decentralised autonomous organisation (DAO) with a global | |
| 112 | 94 … | community at its heart. | |
| 113 | 95 … | Among other things you can suggest and vote on the destinations of the Entropy Flotilla | |
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| 119 | 101 … | .col-lg-7.col-sm-offset-5.text-right.text-box | |
| 120 | 102 … | %br | |
| 121 | 103 … | %br | |
| 122 | 104 … | %h1.text-uppercase | |
| 123 | - help us get afloat | ||
| 105 … | + JOIN ENTROPY | ||
| 124 | 106 … | ||
| 125 | 107 … | .row | |
| 126 | 108 … | .col-sm-7.col-sm-offset-5.text-right.text-box | |
| 127 | 109 … | %p.lead | |
| 128 | - Crowdfund will start early 2017, where you can become part of the | ||
| 129 | - Entropy community with your citizenship on the Ethereum blockchain. | ||
| 110 … | + Entropy is a self organised project. Any contributor or supporter becomes a part of it. | ||
| 111 … | + Support it by building it, making it safer, easier and faster, or with ether during the crowdfund. | ||
| 112 … | + | ||
| 130 | 113 … | %p.lead | |
| 131 | - Do you want to help on the development side? We would love for you to | ||
| 132 | - make Entropy safer, easier, faster. Anyone who successfully | ||
| 133 | - contributes on the | ||
| 134 | - %strong | ||
| 135 | - = link_to 'Entropy Github', 'https://github.com/ProjectEntropy', class:'white' | ||
| 136 | - will become citizen! | ||
| 137 | - %p.lead | ||
| 138 | 114 … | Join our | |
| 139 | 115 … | %strong | |
| 140 | 116 … | = link_to 'community', page_path('community'), class: 'white' | |
| 141 | 117 … | and learn how you can become a part of Entropy now. | |
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